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What happens?
A remembered meeting in a bleak landscape becomes an image of failed love.
The main idea
A failed relationship makes one memory into a lasting lens through which the speaker interprets love.
1. “the sun was white, as though chidden of God,”
Method: Colour imagery
The sun fails to provide the warmth conventionally associated with it.
2. “a few leaves lay on the starving sod;”
Method: Personification
The earth seems deprived of nourishment, reflecting the relationship.
3. “The smile on your mouth was the deadest thing”
Method: Superlative paradox
A smile, normally a sign of life, becomes an image of emotional extinction.
4. “keen lessons that love deceives,”
Method: Personification
The speaker converts a particular loss into a broad, pessimistic lesson.
Form and structure
Four quatrains with enclosing ABBA rhyme; the final stanza returns to details from the opening.
Development, voice and tone
Pond and winter — Bleak. Colour and life appear drained from the setting.
Eyes and smile — Bitter. The lovers’ exchanges make intimacy seem exhausted and hostile.
Later lesson — Disillusioned. The remembered scene becomes a general belief about deception in love.
Context
Written in 1867, Hardy’s lyric uses a remembered landscape to test optimistic expectations about love.
Comparison links
When We Two Parted: enduring hurt. Winter Swans: weather and relationships.
Recall question
How does the landscape become part of the memory?